Certainly Love

Everything is good. Almost perfect. Ok. MAybe perfect...The only thing that bothered me was that it was in first person...and it was written in present tense. I really don't like ...

Hey, I think you might like reading my work. Maybe it will inspire you. Your work is great...try and set the story in third person. Oh and I would also ...

You're the first person to have captured my attention. You are very much...a fantastic writer, even better than I. Your use of words are nicely used and I love vampires! ...

First of all, it was written well. But the thing is...the story started out weird. Due to the fact that she had to ask a stupid question. It just came ...